Knocking on Hinata's Door

Subject: Knocking on Hinata's Door Mon May 28, 2012 8:51 am

Knocking on Hinata's Door

Tokyo, Rainbow bridge, night

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bYNESJgzEM8&feature=relmfu

(We see Zim and GIR flying the Voot Runner above the Tokyo Rainbow Bridge.)

Zim: Well here we are GIR at the Tokyo Rainbow Bridge.

GIR: MMMMMMMMMMM Cinder-blocks!

Zim: The reason I decided to show this at night is because the bridge only lights up in the dark and at day it looks like a normal bridge.

GIR: Is the bridge edible, Zim?

Zim: I really don't think it's a good idea to eat a bridge GIR.

GIR: OOOOOOOOOOO bright colors!

Zim: I'm sending this ship home were done for tonight.

GIR: OK.

Tokyo Baseball stadium, night

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jrtebud86c&feature=relmfu

(We see a baseball game going on between two teams, one team player gets a.............HOME RUN. The ball is sent flying into the sky.)

Sky, night

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vNvlsUNfZKA

(The baseball gets lodged in the ship's engine and the ship is starting to fall from the sky.)

Zim: This is getting freaky.

GIR: So Zim what happening?

Zim: Well I’m trying to get the controls back online or else were going to end up as a talking pancake.

GIR: OH NO!!!!

Zim: Well I'm trying to eject this baseball........................OH COME ON!!!!!!

GIR: So what next?

Zim: We have to eject GIR!

(Zim hits a button labeled “Eject”, causing Zim and GIR to be thrown out of the Voot Runner as it crashes into some area.)

Backyard, night

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YzhmrdGKJjw

(as the Voot Runner crash lands we see it land in a Backyard, a silhouette is seen watching the crash.)

Silhouette 1: Incredible.

(Suddenly a group of people grabs the aircraft remains and takes it into the house they are all about GIR'S height.)

Japanese Streets, night

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cg_HAQAOnAI

(Zim and GIR land in the streets. Zim looks around troubled.)

GIR: What's troubling You, Zim?

Zim: We have lost our Voot Runner it's our only way we can get back home.

GIR: Don't worry we will find it.

Zim: You're right I carry this radar Voot Runners are installed with homing beacons.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xB_R5RdNm90

(Zim starts scanning to find that the ship's is located at a certain part of Tokyo. He smiles at the results)

Zim: This is going to promising.

GIR: can I play a song as we get there.

Zim: Sure why not.

(GIR turns on a radio.)

Radio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LAkn0ORDxUc

Tokyo, streets, day

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cr8ehTKERBE

(We see Zim and GIR walking across the streets for sometime.)

GIR: MMMMMMMMMMM Pocket watches, so how long until we get to our destination,Zim?

Zim: I say about 1 block.

(Suddenly we see an ice cream truck show up and an alien jumps out it is a mechanical creature looks like this.)

Zim: It's a member of the Bibodo gang, but what's it doing out here, GIR?

GIR: It's going to attack us.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bSbTrxKGyk0

(Zim and the Bibodo gang member proceed to fight eventually Zim wins, however the explosion send Zim and GIR flying.)

GIR: WERE-

Zim: DON'T SAY IT!!! THIS HAPPENS TOO MUCH IN POKEMON!!!!

(Zim and GIR make a twinkle in the sky as they fly off.)

House, day, outside

(We hear three voices one is an adult one is a boy the other is a girl.)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8AHt79QvVc

Mother(Voice off screen): Fuyuki, Natsumi I'm going to work I'll be back at about 5 o clock.

Fuyuki(Voice off screen): OK Mom.

Natsumi(Voice off screen): See you later mom.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n6KZ1AwBLFI

(As the two go inside suddenly a large flaming object lands near the house, the fire clears revealing...........IT'S ZIM AND GIR!! They manage to get up and but are blackened.)

Zim: Well that was one heck of an experience.

GIR: Well this soot tastes good.

Zim anyhow we have to get into that house..................but how.

GIR: I have an idea.

Zim: Oh no.

GIR: Oh yes Zim.

House, outside day

*DING DONG*, *DING DONG*, *DING DONG*

(We see a girl opens the door she looks like this.)

Natsumi: Hello?

(We see nothing.)

Natsumi: Well nobody is here. Wonder if it's that stupid-

(Suddenly we hear a rustling in some bushes.)

Natsumi: HUH?

Meanwhile........

(We see Zim and GIR walking through a window.)

Zim: Well that's a great plan but we still need to find the Voot Runner.

Voice (off screen): How about you could try using a door.

Zim: Thank you-

(Zim turns around and sees a boy looking at him and GIR runs off. He looks like this)

Fuyuki: Hello mister my name is Fuyuki Hinata.

Zim: OK could you tell us how I can get my ship back.

Fuyuki: well you make a turn left there's a room that gets you to the basement-

Zim: And?

WHAM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VBd_WsW_c6I

(We see an alien knocks the boy out with a frying pan, it is a black creature resembling a Tadpole)

Tamama: Hi sir I'm Tamama. I knocked out that boy because he said too much information

Zim: OK I just leaving.

Tamama: You haven't read me a story.

Zim: I have more important things to do kid.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RH4xU8arN9M

(Tamama Suddenly anger chases Zim down the hallway, Zim bumps into GIR.)

GIR: Hey Zim are dairies edible?

Zim: Not right now GIR we have to find our spaceship.

GIR: Zim what thing chaseing you?

Zim: That's a Keronian they are from planet Keron.

GIR: Don't worry we can hide in here.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ydL4TrO-51A

(Zim and GIR suddenly jump into a room. But notice something is wrong.)

Zim: GIR do you have a feeling that someone is watching us.

GIR: uh yeah actually. I suddenly feel cold is this room haunted or something?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9We2XsVZfc

(Suddenly a ghost rises from the floor of the house. It looks like this. GIR takes out a vacuum cleaner.)

GIR: WATCH OUT ZIM, I'M GOING TO GO GHOSTBUSTERS ON THIS BANSHEE!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E2sPmtLg60k

Ghost: Wait, I know where your spaceship is!

Zim: Really?

Ghost: Yeah just open the fringe.

Zim: OK Ms. Ghost, then what happens?

Ghost: Have a nice day. By the way can you come back here when you get old an die. I don't have that many people to talk with?

(Suddenly Zim and GIR are transported somewhere else.)

Base, inside

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IMK-y8w6YhA

(We see Zim and GIR walking around until they find their ship.)

Zim: Well we finally made to our ship.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0V-vyJu_TOY

(Suddenly a Green Alien resembling a frog appears.)

Keroro: Hello I'm Sergeant Keroro and right now your trust-passing............WAIT A SECOND ARE YOU PART OF THE MEN IN BLACK!!!???

Zim: The men in black doesn’t exist. By the way don't you have about 4 other members of your gang.

Keroro: First off were a platoon and *sigh* they took a day off.

Zim & GIR: *Bursts in to laughter*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2J8alSe0bFg

(Suddenly Keroro summons a giant robot and they proceed to fight Zim wins .)

Zim: I'm leaving come on GIR.

(Suddenly a door opens and we See Fuyuki, Natsumi, And Tamama.)

Zim: Who are you?

Natsumi: I'm Natsumi Hinata.

Zim: Never heard of you.

Natsumi: I really don't know about the rest of you but this guy poses a bigger threat than that stupid frog everyone get him!

Zim & GIR: *Gulp*

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wshw0coHcnw

(A fight between Zim and everyone else occurs, Zim eventually wins the fight and makes a get away.)

Zim: Adios!

Natsumi: Get back here!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoF_TatNuQk

(Zim and GIR manage to pilot the ship in a last minute get away.)

Zim: Well were managed to get away let's get home right now.

GIR: Can we have pizza.

Zim: Sure, hey GIR what is that book.

GIR: Natsumi's diary.

Zim: Y-you're going to read that woman’s entries?! GIR you-

GIR: Correction I’m going to eat it.

Zim: *Has the expression that one makes before vomiting*

(GIR turns on the radio)

Radio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tQGIa8xOmjg

Meanwhile.......

(We see a woman walking back to her house. She looks like this)

Subject: Re: Knocking on Hinata's Door Mon May 28, 2012 7:30 pm

LOVE the fact that he gets out a vacum and going to host buster on this banshee-hahaha cheers

Funny all the stuff Gir wanted to eat-yokes but funny.

I thought the ghost was cool-ghosty but not scary

A real fun read

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