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PostSubject: Knocking on Hinata's Door   Knocking on Hinata's Door Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 8:51 am

Knocking on Hinata's Door

Tokyo, Rainbow bridge, night

(We see Zim and GIR flying the Voot Runner above the Tokyo Rainbow Bridge.)

Zim: Well here we are GIR at the Tokyo Rainbow Bridge.

GIR: MMMMMMMMMMM Cinder-blocks!

Zim: The reason I decided to show this at night is because the bridge only lights up in the dark and at day it looks like a normal bridge.

GIR: Is the bridge edible, Zim?

Zim: I really don't think it's a good idea to eat a bridge GIR.

GIR: OOOOOOOOOOO bright colors!

Zim: I'm sending this ship home were done for tonight.


Tokyo Baseball stadium, night

(We see a baseball game going on between two teams, one team player gets a.............HOME RUN. The ball is sent flying into the sky.)

Sky, night

(The baseball gets lodged in the ship's engine and the ship is starting to fall from the sky.)

Zim: This is getting freaky.

GIR: So Zim what happening?

Zim: Well I’m trying to get the controls back online or else were going to end up as a talking pancake.

GIR: OH NO!!!!

Zim: Well I'm trying to eject this baseball........................OH COME ON!!!!!!

GIR: So what next?

Zim: We have to eject GIR!

(Zim hits a button labeled “Eject”, causing Zim and GIR to be thrown out of the Voot Runner as it crashes into some area.)

Backyard, night

(as the Voot Runner crash lands we see it land in a Backyard, a silhouette is seen watching the crash.)

Silhouette 1: Incredible.

(Suddenly a group of people grabs the aircraft remains and takes it into the house they are all about GIR'S height.)

Japanese Streets, night

(Zim and GIR land in the streets. Zim looks around troubled.)

GIR: What's troubling You, Zim?

Zim: We have lost our Voot Runner it's our only way we can get back home.

GIR: Don't worry we will find it.

Zim: You're right I carry this radar Voot Runners are installed with homing beacons.

(Zim starts scanning to find that the ship's is located at a certain part of Tokyo. He smiles at the results)

Zim: This is going to promising.

GIR: can I play a song as we get there.

Zim: Sure why not.

(GIR turns on a radio.)


Tokyo, streets, day

(We see Zim and GIR walking across the streets for sometime.)

GIR: MMMMMMMMMMM Pocket watches, so how long until we get to our destination,Zim?

Zim: I say about 1 block.

(Suddenly we see an ice cream truck show up and an alien jumps out it is a mechanical creature looks like this.)

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Zim: It's a member of the Bibodo gang, but what's it doing out here, GIR?

GIR: It's going to attack us.

(Zim and the Bibodo gang member proceed to fight eventually Zim wins, however the explosion send Zim and GIR flying.)



(Zim and GIR make a twinkle in the sky as they fly off.)

House, day, outside

(We hear three voices one is an adult one is a boy the other is a girl.)

Mother(Voice off screen): Fuyuki, Natsumi I'm going to work I'll be back at about 5 o clock.

Fuyuki(Voice off screen): OK Mom.

Natsumi(Voice off screen): See you later mom.

(As the two go inside suddenly a large flaming object lands near the house, the fire clears revealing...........IT'S ZIM AND GIR!! They manage to get up and but are blackened.)

Zim: Well that was one heck of an experience.

GIR: Well this soot tastes good.

Zim anyhow we have to get into that house..................but how.

GIR: I have an idea.

Zim: Oh no.

GIR: Oh yes Zim.

House, outside day


(We see a girl opens the door she looks like this.)

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Natsumi: Hello?

(We see nothing.)

Natsumi: Well nobody is here. Wonder if it's that stupid-

(Suddenly we hear a rustling in some bushes.)

Natsumi: HUH?


(We see Zim and GIR walking through a window.)

Zim: Well that's a great plan but we still need to find the Voot Runner.

Voice (off screen): How about you could try using a door.

Zim: Thank you-

(Zim turns around and sees a boy looking at him and GIR runs off. He looks like this)

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Fuyuki: Hello mister my name is Fuyuki Hinata.

Zim: OK could you tell us how I can get my ship back.

Fuyuki: well you make a turn left there's a room that gets you to the basement-

Zim: And?


(We see an alien knocks the boy out with a frying pan, it is a black creature resembling a Tadpole)

Tamama: Hi sir I'm Tamama. I knocked out that boy because he said too much information

Zim: OK I just leaving.

Tamama: You haven't read me a story.

Zim: I have more important things to do kid.

(Tamama Suddenly anger chases Zim down the hallway, Zim bumps into GIR.)

GIR: Hey Zim are dairies edible?

Zim: Not right now GIR we have to find our spaceship.

GIR: Zim what thing chaseing you?

Zim: That's a Keronian they are from planet Keron.

GIR: Don't worry we can hide in here.

(Zim and GIR suddenly jump into a room. But notice something is wrong.)

Zim: GIR do you have a feeling that someone is watching us.

GIR: uh yeah actually. I suddenly feel cold is this room haunted or something?

(Suddenly a ghost rises from the floor of the house. It looks like this. GIR takes out a vacuum cleaner.)

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Ghost: Wait, I know where your spaceship is!

Zim: Really?

Ghost: Yeah just open the fringe.

Zim: OK Ms. Ghost, then what happens?

Ghost: Have a nice day. By the way can you come back here when you get old an die. I don't have that many people to talk with?

(Suddenly Zim and GIR are transported somewhere else.)

Base, inside

(We see Zim and GIR walking around until they find their ship.)

Zim: Well we finally made to our ship.

(Suddenly a Green Alien resembling a frog appears.)

Keroro: Hello I'm Sergeant Keroro and right now your trust-passing............WAIT A SECOND ARE YOU PART OF THE MEN IN BLACK!!!???

Zim: The men in black doesn’t exist. By the way don't you have about 4 other members of your gang.

Keroro: First off were a platoon and *sigh* they took a day off.

Zim & GIR: *Bursts in to laughter*

(Suddenly Keroro summons a giant robot and they proceed to fight Zim wins .)

Zim: I'm leaving come on GIR.

(Suddenly a door opens and we See Fuyuki, Natsumi, And Tamama.)

Zim: Who are you?

Natsumi: I'm Natsumi Hinata.

Zim: Never heard of you.

Natsumi: I really don't know about the rest of you but this guy poses a bigger threat than that stupid frog everyone get him!

Zim & GIR: *Gulp*

(A fight between Zim and everyone else occurs, Zim eventually wins the fight and makes a get away.)

Zim: Adios!

Natsumi: Get back here!

(Zim and GIR manage to pilot the ship in a last minute get away.)

Zim: Well were managed to get away let's get home right now.

GIR: Can we have pizza.

Zim: Sure, hey GIR what is that book.

GIR: Natsumi's diary.

Zim: Y-you're going to read that woman’s entries?! GIR you-

GIR: Correction I’m going to eat it.

Zim: *Has the expression that one makes before vomiting*

(GIR turns on the radio)



(We see a woman walking back to her house. She looks like this)

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Mom: Fuyuki, Natsumi! I'm home.

(She enters the house to see that both of them are covered in soot.)

Mom: What happened to you.

Natsumi: Long story.



. Pokemon is spoofed

. the Ghostbusters are spoofed

. The Tokyo Rainbow bridge looks like this

. Normal adult male Keronians look like this

. Normal adult female Keronians look like this

. Normal Male Keronian Tadpoles or Normal Male Keronian Children look like this

. Normal Female Keronian Tadpoles or Normal Female Keronian Children Look like this

. Keronian Soldiers look like this

. Keronian Police Officers look like this

. Female Keronian Mail Dilvery look like this

Keronian Ninja Masters Look like this

. Keronian Ninja soldiers look like this

. Cyborg Keronian Ninjas look like this

. Kunoichi Solider Keronians Look like this

. Keronian Ninja soldiers look like this

. Keronian Scientists Look like this

. Scientist Keronian Tadpoles Look like this

. Keronian Guards look like this
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PostSubject: Re: Knocking on Hinata's Door   Knocking on Hinata's Door Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 7:30 pm

LOVE the fact that he gets out a vacum and going to host buster on this banshee-hahaha cheers

Funny all the stuff Gir wanted to eat-yokes but funny.

I thought the ghost was cool-ghosty but not scary

A real fun read
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