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PostSubject: Camp Verlore    Camp Verlore  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 11, 2011 7:10 am

Camp Verlore

Bus, inside, day


(we see a bus driving near a camp.)

Bus driver: OK kids were approaching our stop.

(We then see Zim and GIR sitting at the back of the bus.)

Zim: GIR I can't believe you accidentally signed us up for some summer camp.

GIR: Aw man. I thought it was a contract.

Zim: I still don't like the fact of being in some woods for 2 days.

GIR: Zim. MMMMM plastic.

Camp Verlore, day

(The Bus lands down at some camp area and we see a man standing there.)

Coach: Welcome to Camp Verlore, my name is Coach.

Zim: doesn’t “Verlore” mean “lost” in Afrikaans?

Coach: Yes it does Solider.


Kid 1: first activity?

Coach: river rafting, now first things first blow into the tubes of you're river rafts.

(Zim takes out some complex vacuum cleaner-like device and uses it on his inflatable raft.)

Kid 1: Whoa!

Kid 2: amazing!

Kid 3: What is that?

Zim: My hyper air pump.

GIR: Zim, I call driving.
River, day

(We see Zim and GIR in a raft as everyone else is in one too.)

Coach: Um Soldiers.....we made a wrong turn.....WERE GOING TO THE RIVER RAPPIDS!!!

Kids: *screams*

GIR: Whee.

Zim: Oh.......GIR.

(We see everyone tries to avoid any danger eventually they survive although Zim and GIR are the farther away.)

GIR: That was close at least I still have my paint chips.

(Coach gets a better look and faints, everyone points behind GIR, and Zim is panicking.)

GIR: Aw whats the matter Zim?


(GIR looks around to see that he and Zim are on the edge of a waterfall and are about to fall off.)

Zim: Oh no!

(They fall off.)

Woods, day

(Zim and GIR land somewhere.)

Zim: GIR That was close.

GIR: let's do it again.

(The two walk until they see a tree.)

Zim: I think I have an idea, let's climb that tree in order to see how far away we from the camp.

(They climb the tree to see they are very far away.)

Zim: amazing view, this is going to take about 2 days to get back.

GIR: what are we going to do then Zim.

Zim: we could talk.

(They use their jet packs to get down.)

Zim: GIR I once read a story about a type of fish-like aliens.

GIR: Really.

Zim: Yeah and their underwater kingdom.


(We see Zim reading a story. In front of a camp fire.)

Zim:....“You Knew, Didn't you? I'm part of you? Close, close, close! I'm the reason why it's no go?
Why things are what they are.?”

GIR: It was Good, even though I only listened to that part of the story. good night Zim.

Zim: Good night my friend.

(Zim puts out the fire and the two go to bed.)

Day, woods

(We see that Zim and GIR are farther into the woods.)

Zim: Well were both hungry I got an idea.

GIR: like what.

(Zim sniffs the air.)

Zim: I think someone has a picnic basket.

(We see a picnic basket Zim and GIR grab it and eat the contents and run off.)

Woman: What on earth ate the picnic basket.

Boy: Well there’s some tracks it left.

Girl: We could follow it but we have another picnic basket.

Camp Verlore, day

Coach: What am I going to do the camp is competing against, another team and it's the last day.

(Zim and GIR show up.)

Coach: GOOD TO SEE YOU!!! Go help us win the game capture the flag.

Zim: right.


(Capture the flag is played for sometime eventually Zim and GIR'S team wins. They hand out awards.)

Zim: this is great we win something.

GIR: I like the medals.

Zim: they don't have candy in them.

GIR: Nuts.

(Suddenly an RV shows up and drives through the camping ground.)

Boy: Mom there’s a camp going on.

Woman: oh no!

(Zim and GIR stare in horror as the vehicle starts to move out of control as it is about collide right into them.)

Girl: There's a kid out there!

(luckily the RV Narrowly misses Zim and GIR, but crashes into the other teams cabin, without hurting anyone. The bus shows up.)

Zim: glad to get out of here.

GIR: you do admit it was fun.

Zim: Right.



.The entire episode was inspired by this song

. the story Zim reads to GIR is Lord of the Flies
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Government Concil
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PostSubject: Re: Camp Verlore    Camp Verlore  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 11, 2011 5:25 pm

Great Summer reading.

I would want to go to their CAMP-maybe not getting lost.

Like Gir said you have to admit it was FUN-like Fun in reading it. cheers cheers cheers

3 cheers for came VELORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good read lord of the flies study study study study alien Laughing Laughing
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