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Invader Zim
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PostSubject: She who Puppeteers Humans   She who Puppeteers Humans Icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 9:48 am

She who Puppeteers Humans

Town, night

(We see a silhouette with purple eyes accompanied by a small robot silhouette. NOTE: THE SILHOUETTE SPEAKS IN A FEMALE VOICE WITH A SLIGHT BRITISH ACCENT)

Silhouette: MIMI how was you mission on the destroying the individual known as Invader Zim?

(MIMI does various gestures such as shaking her head and giving the thumbs down)

Silhouette: You mean you failed, well then were going to have hurry up phase two. Time to put my disguise to the test.

Field, day

(We see Zim and GIR walking through an Asian field.)

Zim: Well here we are at the Japanese Country side.

GIR: You were right Zim visiting the Japanese Country side was a great idea.

Zim: I know right, by the way have you ever noticed that sometimes some people always think that high school is based on some social hierarchy.

GIR: Really?

(Suddenly Zim and GIR hear a voice it sounds old.)

Voice (Off screen): HELP US!!!

Zim: GIR where is it coming from?

GIR: It could be from anywhere.

(Zim and GIR look around until they see a banzai garden that looks like this)

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Zim: Hello? Anyone in there?

Voice (Off Screen): Yes. Let me come out.

(Suddenly out of part of the banzai garden rises out a Caterpillar. It looks like this.)

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GIR: Hey Mister Caterpillar!

Zim: So what's the problem sir.

Caterpillar: Terrible news, someone is going to destroy us all!

Zim: WHAT!!!????

Caterpillar: I forgot to tell you this but I am the Grand Elder of Heaven and the Almighty sent me down here to inform you what is happening.

GIR: Why are you called the Grand Elder?

Grand Elder of Heaven: I am the very first Angel the Almighty created.

Zim: But I destroyed the King of Terror.

Grand Elder of Heaven: True but now a new evil reigns that is planning on planetary conquest.

Zim: oh.

Grand Elder of Heaven: You must stop it!

(The Grand Elder slowly bursts into light as he fades off somewhere else.)

Zim: Looks like we gotta find this Villain but where are they?

GIR: Perhaps that town over there, Zim.

(Zim turns around to see a creepy looking town. It looks like this.)

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GIR: I trust nothing bad's going to happen to us, Right.

Zim: Um GIR, I doubt that.

Town, day

(GIR Runs in the middle of the town.)

GIR: WHAT'S UP PEOPLE!!! Wait a minute, can I ask a question Zim?

Zim: Sure thing you can ask any question any time.

GIR: What happened to the town population?

(Zim looks around to see with the minor exception of Himself and GIR there is absolutely no one there.)

Zim: Well we better look around to see what happening, personally I think we'll bump into some young girls who'll make that nut case Ms. Nishizawa look absolutely normal in terms of the sanity department.

GIR: You mean you read a book about something like this happened?

Zim: Correct, It was a fictional town with many dark secrets that all involved horrifying results.

(GIR finds a radio.)

GIR: Mind if I play music Zim?

Zim: Go right ahead.


(Zim and GIR look around for the towns people. They search everywhere. After searching for sometime they bump into a girl. She looks like this.)

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Zim: Excuse me young lady but could you tell us something.


Girl: *Sigh* yes sir.

Zim: What happened to this town? Where is everyone?

Girl: Follow me if you want answers.

(Zim and GIR follow her.)

Building, inside, day

(Zim, GIR, and the Girl walk into an abandoned building.)

Zim: I don't get it where are they?

Girl: What do you mean.

Zim: You explicitly told me you knew where everyone is. What is this?

GIR: Zim I'm scared.

Girl: *Very creepy laugh* You Fell into my trap. You came all the way here and now this place will be your grave. Sick him MIMI!

(Suddenly the Cat following starts to flicker revealing it's a robot. It looks like this.)

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Zim: MIMI!

GIR: *Screams in terror*

(Zim and MIMI fight for sometime. Zim wins.)

GIR: *Sigh of relief*

Zim: With MIMI in need of repairs shall we confront the villain behind this operation.

GIR: Sure.

(Zim and GIR manage to find the basement of the house to see something bizarre. He sees every single person who is the town being used as organic batteries.)

Zim: What the heck?!

GIR: Have you seen this before Zim?

Zim: Yes the Irken Empire does this to certain criminals on prison planets. But how could this villain get their hands on it.

Voice (Off screen): Maybe if they were Irken they could.

(Zim and GIR turn around to see the girl from earlier her entire body becomes static revealing that she looks like this. Zim has a panicked look on his face)

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GIR: Can who are you?

Zim: Y-you don't remember!? Tak has returned to finish what she started 11 years ago!

Tak: That's an understatement Zim, considering that I survived. You see I spent many years drifting through space until I landed on the planet Los-Helious it took about a total of 2 years to finally get MIMI and my ship repaired. Even reprogramming MIMI wasn't perfect considering she still has emotions.

Zim: What are you planning?

Tak: The first phase involves one thing and one thing only, destroying you so the rest of the operation goes smooth. I will first make this place your grave and then conquer it in to prove I'm an Invader.

GIR: You have issues.

Zim: Bring it on.

(Zim and Tak proceed to fight. Eventually after sometime of fighting one another Zim wins the fight, however Tak Escapes with MIMI.)

Tak: You may have won the battle but you haven't won the war.

Zim: We'll see about that.

(Suddenly the pods that contained everyone burst open revealing everyone who stare in surprise in the ruins of the house)

Mayor: Our benefactor!

(He picks up Zim and GIR who stare amazed.)

Mayor: In celebration were going to have a picnic in your name.

Zim & GIR: YES!!!



. The entire episode was inspired by this song

. The idea of a wise caterpillar was used in Alice in Wonderland

. The idea of humans being turned into organic batteries is a refrence to the matrix

. The Book Zim read prior to the events of the episode is Ryukishi07's book When They Cry

. Ryukishi07's book When They Cry is also what the creepy town is supposed to spoof
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PostSubject: Re: She who Puppeteers Humans   She who Puppeteers Humans Icon_minitimeMon Sep 17, 2012 2:27 pm

This was a FUN read.

The graphics made the story come to life. The Bonsai Garden so peaceful. The catepillar-quirky. The town looks so real.

The last song Drive away -really neat
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