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PostSubject: Vigilante Zim    Vigilante Zim  Icon_minitimeFri Jul 08, 2011 7:44 am

Vigilante Zim

Zim's base, inside, day

(We see Zim reading the newspaper.)

Zim: Listen to this a crime spree has occurred and things have been stolen by a unknown criminal.

GIR: Zim can I have the newspaper.

Zim: Sure why.

(GIR eats it. As Zim dials the phone.)

Neighborhood, night

(We see Zim Giving a speech to a crowd.)

Zim: And so we should turn this neighborhood block-watch into a Vigilante's committee.

GIR: What's a Vigilante?

Zim: Someone who takes the law into their own hands GIR.

Crowd: *applaud*

Zim: Their taking this surprisingly well.

Retirement home,day, inside

(We see a long line of people going to join the Vigilante's committee. As Zim is wearing a hat.)

Zim: GIR this is a lot more people than I ever thought would come.

GIR: Oh boy Zim! Who do you have?

Zim: I got several strong people although I gave them batons due to the fact they had no gun license and the Senior citizens who I use as informants on criminal activities. Did I mention I give out hats.

(We see a creature resembling a person with Squid facial features and carries his brain around shows up.)

Zim: An Ood? Sign you're name here.

(The Ood Takes out a pencil and Sings his name, while he walks away. As a Sea sponge and Starfish wearing some fish bowls on their heads.)

Spongebob: Have we meet before I'm Spongebob.

Patrick: I'm Patrick.

Zim: You two sign here.

(Spongebob and Patrick sign the notes as a frog-like alien dressed as a painter shows up.)

Keronian: I'm joining.

GIR: So sign here.

Zim: I was going to say that!

GIR: A Keronian?

(He signs and leaves. As a Female Tadpole Keronian)

Zim: Just do what he did.


(We see everyone cursing the streets and fighting crime.)

Zim: Well that's all done, did you see those two Keronians GIR?

Painter Keronian: I found some guy who’s a crook.

Female Tadpole: I got him! I Got him!

(Zim walks over to see they “arrested” The Ood.)

Zim: He's one of our own men.

Female Tadpole: aw man.

(They release the Ood allowing him to continue helping everyone else.)

GIR: Weird guys Zim

Zim: Next time ask how they got this job.
Nightly News station, night, inside

News reporter: We have The Vigilante Leaders here on news tonight.

GIR: are you going to eat that.

Zim: Well I turned this dream into a reality.

(GIR takes out a piece of paper with a drawing of a silhouette and GIR looking mighty.)

News reporter: that is?

GIR: What were going do to the criminal.

Zim: I figured out he's going to rob the Jewelry store quick let's go.

Jewelry store, night, inside

(We see Zim and GIR guarding the Jewelry while a crook appears.)

Zim: OK GIR time to get this guy straight.

GIR: Give him all you got.

(a fight occurs between Zim and the crook, Zim eventually wins the fight and arrests him.)

Public square, day

(We see Zim dragging the Crook into the square in front of everyone Zim rips off the mask showing....)

Zim: Who are you

(We see some old guy.)

Man: I'm the Man.

GIR: Who's “The Man”, Zim.

Zim: A person who's the industry.

(The Man takes out a club only to be disintegrated by Zim.)

Zim: Well I'm done with this job.

(Zim and GIR run off into the sunset.)



. Normal adult male Keronians look like this

. Normal adult female Keronians look like this

. Normal Male Keronian Tadpoles or Normal Male Keronian Children look like this

. Normal Female Keronian Tadpoles or Normal Female Keronian Children Look like this

. Keronian Artists look like this

. the Ood look like this

. The Hat Zim puts on in the entire episode looks like this

.Through out the episode the Vigilante's committee members, except GIR, Spongebob and Patrick wear this hat

. The Man is the personification of the industry and ambiguous weather or not he's an actual person.

. The Man looks something like this

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PostSubject: Re: Vigilante Zim    Vigilante Zim  Icon_minitimeMon Jul 11, 2011 5:28 pm

Fun read.
Uncle terry always like saying the Man and sticking it to the man-big industry cheers lol!

I like all the foot notes as much fun to see and read as the script cheers cheers alien alien Exclamation Exclamation Exclamation
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