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Invader Zim
Invader Zim

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Location : Somewhere in the United States

Name: Invader Zim
specices: Irken

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PostSubject: Attention Shoppers    Attention Shoppers  Icon_minitimeThu Mar 03, 2011 1:50 pm

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City Streets, day

(We see Zim and GIR walking down the streets.)

Zim: Well today I got a party time job at Tom Nook’s general store.

GIR: Sounds good this green eggs and ham tastes good.

Zim: Next time check the expiration date.

Nook’s Store

(Zim and GIR enter the store to see a raccoon running the place.)

Tom Nook: You must be Mr. Zim.

Zim: Well Mr. Nook What job do we have for today?

Tom Nook: You have to deliver all this supplies.

GIR: MMMMMMM looks good.

Zim: Didn’t you just have breakfast?

Tom Nook: Come back when you’re done.

Zim: Ready to begin in a musical delivery montage?

GIR: You beat.

(We see Zim and GIR delivering various goods to many people in the area.)

City Park, day

(We see Zim and GGIR going through the park.)

Zim: This is a short cut back to Nook’s Store.

GIR: I can’t wait for the money.

Voice (off screen): All right you!

(Zim and GIR look through the bushes and see Tom Nook talking to someone.)

Guy: oh it’s only you

Tom Nook: Quit Playing Where’s the money.

Guy: I’ll give it back tomorrow.

Tom Nook: There’s two types of fish one that comes willingly, and the other that is flapping around like a big idiot. Which one are you?

(Tom Nook takes out a baseball bat.)

Guy: Um…



GIR: Zim what is the best word that describes this character?

Zim: A weird mixture of Tony Soprano. Earthier way we have to stop this guy!

Nook’s Store, night

(We see Zim and GIR Watch Tom Nook talking to a group of people.)

Zim: The Vipers?!

GIR: Those snakes are here?

Viper: So Tom Nook what do you have to say?

Tom Nook: I’ll pay you guys to rob the city bank.

Zim: Uh-oh there going to break into song again!

Viper: Tom Nook we found a song that fits a description of this event.

(The Vipers and Ton Nook prepare to break into song…)

The Vipers and Tom Nook (Singing): (WARNING SOME MILD LYRICS OF CRIME)

Zim: That was pretty good.

GIR: Encore.

(Zim Jumps out of nowhere and proceeds to attack everyone in the room and manages to detonate everyone.)

Zim: Look free money.

GIR: Let’s get some dinner.

Zim: But this time not moldy food.



.Tom Nook Looks like this Attention Shoppers  Tom_Nook_%28Movie%29

. the Vipers look like this

. the reason the Vipers Break into song is because I’ve noticed that in musical films, the bad guys mostly get the cool, but slightly intimating ones
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Government Concil
Government Concil

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Join date : 2009-09-15
Location : midhudson vally

Name: spongebob
specices: sea sponge

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PostSubject: Re: Attention Shoppers    Attention Shoppers  Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 5:48 am

Funny title to match funny story lol!

i like the green eggs and ham statement cheers cheers cheers

The ready for musical montague lol! lol! lol!

Not break out into song AGAIN lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!

Funny stuff great way to start a day-a good laugh
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