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Invader Zim
Invader Zim

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PostSubject: The Mansion    The Mansion  Icon_minitimeThu Feb 17, 2011 2:00 pm

The Mansion

Mansion, outside

(We see Zim and GIR walk over to a run down manor.)

Zim: GIR!?

GIR: I don’t like the look at that place!

Zim: Were just going inside.

GIR: It’s not superstition I just don’t like the paint job.


(We see some military hanger, a silhouette is meditating, someone opens he door.)

Silhouette 1: who is that?!

(he is about to attack the person When it shouts…)

Silhouette 2: STOP!!! It’s me.

Silhouette 1: What is it I’m trying to gain inner peace?

Silhouette 2: Sergeant Keroro said he wanted to see us, I can’t wait to make Serge happy.

Silhouette 1: Well something has to be up lately.

Meeting room

(We see the Keronian giving announcements.)

Keroro: Well Private and….who are you again?

Silhouette 1: I’m the Lance-Corporal I’ve been working for you at least 3 years.

Keroro: Right….anyhow you two are going to be investigating a lonesome mansion.

Corporal Silhouette: Sergeant Think rationally.

Silhouette 2: Ok serge.

Mansion, inside

(We see Zim and GIR walking inside the mansion.)

Zim: Well I’ve gotten some batteries for some cars.

GIR: this stuff looks good.

Zim: try not to eat it, because I’m going to need raw materials.

Meanwhile in the same building

(We see the 1st silhouette looking terrified as can be while the other.)

Silhouette 2: do you believe in ghosts? They don’t exist.

Silhouette 1: I know I’m terrified if an enemy is stalking us.

Silhouette 2: Let’s call Kululu

Kululu (off screen): And I wound like some curry with that. Hello?

Silhouette 2: Hello.

Kululu (Off screen): Oh it’s you private, the mansion has been built in 1874 and is rather big.

Silhouette 2: what are you doing?

Kululu (Off screen): Well I’m visiting my Blog on MySpace, who knew that many aliens wanted to be my friend.

Silhouette 2: Can you show me some time.

Kululu (Off screen): I’ll do that when you’re in collage.

Silhouette 2: Well Lance Corporal we can…..Where are you?


Zim: Looks like some else is here I bet it’s some real state agent.

GIR: OOOOO you have a nice face Mask Grand M-

Silhouette 1: What are you doing?!

(We finally see the 1st silhouette showing a terrified, blue frog-like ninja creature.)

Zim: Well I’ll be its some weird guy.

Dororo: I’m Lance-Corporal Dororo and this is my mask.

(The Provoked Ninja battles Zim for some time after quiet awhile Zim wins sending Dororo flying out of the room.)

Silhouette 2: Dororo?

Zim: What the-

(We see a Black……TADPOLE.)

Tamama: I’m Private Second Class Tamama and you look very weird.

Zim: well be leaving now see you-

GIR: A stuffed animal!

(GIR squeezes Tamama VERY TIGHT Causing the frog to attack him a fight breaks between Zim and the tadpole resulting in Zim wining and sending him flying out of the house.)

Zim: Let’s go home.

GIR: Agreed.



. The entire episode was inspired by this poster

. . Normal Keronian Tadpoles or Normal Keronian Children look like this

. Keronian Ninja soldiers look like this

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Government Concil
Government Concil

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Join date : 2009-09-15
Location : midhudson vally

Name: spongebob
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PostSubject: Re: The Mansion    The Mansion  Icon_minitimeThu Feb 17, 2011 3:07 pm

Favorite two lones are No i dont like the paint job lol! lol! lol! lol! lol!

Also I have been working for you for three years lol! lol! lol!

Really creepy mansion UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cute tadpoles cheers cheers

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