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PostSubject: Luchador Zim   Luchador Zim Icon_minitimeThu Jan 27, 2011 7:34 am

Luchador Zim

Mexico, night

(We see Zim and GIR wandering a cross a Mexican city.)

Zim: Well GIR here we are Mexico despiet the economics it has a natural beauty.

GIR: COOL lights is it a festival?

Zim: That’s black light they had to replace the real lights with this substance.

GIR: I like these bright colors Zim.

Zim: hey look something is going on in there.

(The two walk in and see a Wrestling match, and quietly sit down.)

GIR: Funny masks.

Zim: I can’t get a good view….

(Zim is suddenly knocked into the wrestling match suddenly a wrestler comes out dressed as a…….TIGER.)

Announcer: and in the second corner is El Odio!

Zim: What’s that smell?

El Odio: That’s the smell of fear!

Zim: Seriously I smell something. It smells like two stink bombs laid eggs and the eggs went rotten.

El Odio: That smell? That’s sulfur it’s part of my costume.

Announcer: 1…..2…..3……FIGHT!

(For most of the match Zim tries to avoid El Odio brute strength and avoid being pounced on Eventually Zim Triggers an energy shield to avoid the attack.)

El Odio: Um that…..HURTS.

GIR: Cool I like this sport.

(Zim proceeds to put the smack down on the weakened El Odio eventually Zim wins the wrestling match.)

Announcer: 1…2-

(Suddenly El Odio gets back up and attacks his opponent and epic fight occurs with the referee desperately trying to avoid the attack)

El Odio: That hurts….

Zim: So I guess I win the match?

Announcer: the winner is that green guy!

GIR: That was wicked!

Zim: Well what’s the prize?

Announcer: all this money.

(The announcer Gives Zim a few dollars and he walks off with the money.)

Zim: Well GIR I guess we should go home.




. Luchador is Spanish for “Fighter”

. Black Light is often used in carnivals and is the colored light

.El Odio is Spanish for “Hatred”

. The costume of El Odio looks something like this Luchador Zim Tiger

. thanks to black light the city looks like this Luchador Zim Mexico11

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PostSubject: Re: Luchador Zim   Luchador Zim Icon_minitimeSun Jan 30, 2011 1:11 pm

I like the back drop of he city of mexico of the black lighting Exclamation Exclamation
cheers cheers
I thought the costume of the wrestler was cool lol! lol!

I like this story funny

One change the first sentetnce try to say something like despiet the economics it ha anatural beauty.

you do not want to hurt anyones feelings
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