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Invader Zim
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PostSubject: The Fresh God of the Maggornites    The Fresh God of the Maggornites   Icon_minitimeSun Oct 17, 2010 12:56 pm

The Fresh God of the Maggornites

The Dragon’s triangle, day

(we see Zim and GIR escape some air craft by sky diving. It explodes as they descend from the sky. They Land in the Voot Runner.)

Zim: well GIR once again we prevented anyone from interfering with our mission!

GIR: YAY!!!!

Zim: so let’s explore the Dragon’s triangle! I bet they have some kind of Game system down there.

(They plunge under water and explore eventually they see a….CITY.)

Zim: THIS IS SO COOL!!!! I wish I brought my camera with me.

GIR: I wonder if they have fast food.

The Lost City of Patorius

(We see a city that looks alien and ancient at the same time.)

Zim: Welcome to Patorius? This place looks nice…

GIR: Hey look a Five Guys!

(Zim and GIR continue walking for sometime until they make it to a group of people wearing Clothes that look like a cross between a Smoking Robe and a Tuxedo.)

Zim: Just what on earth are they doing? I remember visiting this city before but I don’t remember this ritual before.

Mr. Glizeen: Zim is Handsome! Zim is Cute!

Corus: When we think of Zim we give a big salute!

Mr. Glizeen: Zim is Mighty! Zim is grand!

Corus: The glory of Lord Zim is more than we can stand!

Zim: Um….GIR?

GIR: This is so cool!

Zim: Are Those Statures supposed to be…..ME?!

Mr. Glizeen: Hello I am Mr. Glizeen welcome to our….IT’S ZIM! Hey fellow Maggornites Zim is back!

(We see everyone present is bowing before him.)

Mr. Glizeen: you are our god! Praise Zim! And look he has a little friend, Praise him too!

(Mr. Glizeen puts a crown on Zim and We see Zim along with GIR put on top of a large Walrus-like creature, While being Guarded by a bipedal, 6 foot tall…….Weevil.)

The Weevil: HEY ZIM!!!! NICE FIREND!!!!

Mr. Glizeen: In thanks of your return we hired Clones of Fountains of Wayne to play for you!

Zim: This is better than the time I saw the Film Mr. Huggy Teaches Little Kids to use “the force” and fails.

GIR: I Like Fountains of Wayne

Fountains of Wayne:


Zim: that was a fun filled day but where can I sleep Mr. Glizeen?

GIR: I got their autograph.

Mr. Glizeen: Why lord Zim you’ll be staying at the palace we made for you!

(we see a palace made out of solid gold we see Zim and GIR staring with dumb struck. It’s made of…..Solid gold.)

The Weevil: we made it for you, what do you think!

GIR: It’s cool!

Zim: It looks nice but….Why did you built that.

Mr. Glizeen: In honor of your new record at the arcade, you know when you played Hedgehog Hammer at our arcade.

Zim: *suddenly realizes what he’s talking about* Oh yeah I got a score of 100,000,000,000,000.

Some ship, Underwater

Dr. Cell: Soon I Dr. Cell will get revenge on that Alien for running my plan for galactic conquest.

Next morning, Patorius

(We see all these ships battling one another.)

Zim; Dr. Cell is attacking the city?!

The Weevil: Move out troops can you help Lord Zim?

Zim: I will deal with Dr. Cell himself!


(They teleport to the ship)

Dr. Cell: Zim?! Fight time!

( the two fight for sometime eventually Zim wins the battle.)

Zim: VICTORY!!! Now let’s try to figure out which button deactivates the ship?

GIR: It’s got to be this one!


Computer: Self destruct sequence activated!

(Zim and GIR manage to escape and fly away form Patorius.)

Mr. Glizeen: Come back anytime you can Zim!



. The lost city of Patorius is a spoof on the Atlantis and was inspired by this image

. A weevil is a type of Beetle

. the episode’s title is a spoof on the fresh prince of Bel-air

. the Walrus monster was inspire by this art
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Government Concil
Government Concil

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PostSubject: Re: The Fresh God of the Maggornites    The Fresh God of the Maggornites   Icon_minitimeSun Oct 17, 2010 6:43 pm

Lost city so COOL alien alien alien
Fice Guys so COOL cheers cheers :cheersSky diving I want to try that cheers
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