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Invader Zim
Invader Zim

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PostSubject: Four to the Mongo    Four to the Mongo  Icon_minitimeThu Oct 07, 2010 2:21 pm

Four to the Mongo

Space ship

(we see Zim and GIR cleaning up some space ship.)

Zim: well GIR looks like our cleaning is going well in how we managed to get aboard on this ship.

GIR: I like the free food!

Zim: What?!

GIR: this dog treat tastes good.

(As Zim and GIR are talking about progresses suddenly a group of robots show up and attack the ship there in.)

Zim: I told you we should have chose a different star ship!


(These Droids get aboard the ship and start to destroy everything in sight. They eventually get into the room where Zim and GIR are in.)


GIR: well hi and I like to say denies is good…..

(he would have finished what he’s saying but the Droids drag them into another ship.)

Zim: Some vacation THIS is!

Mongo, Slave camp, day

(we see this planet that looks like a desert with very little life.)

Zim: well here we are on the planet Mongo, home to strange objects and other weird things.

(The Droids drag GIR away.)

Mongo, spa

(we see GIR regain conscience to see a another SIR unit, while the two walk down the hall way we see all these SIR units in like their at a Bahamas cruise.)

GIR: this looks fun!

Service Droid: welcome to spa where all your troubles are away!

GIR: this is cool! Although I miss Zim.


(we see Zim and Several aliens in line for some hard labor. All of a sudden a huge robot approaches them)

Great Crud: Hello SLAVES! I am the Great Crud! You are assigned to this operation!

Zim: what’s my first offence!

Great Crud: Service droid fetch me some food!

Service droid: right sir!

(the droid throws a SIR unit into the great heap’s mouth as he eats the robot.)

Zim: I better get GIR out of here!

(as the great heap is eating the already broken robot, Zim sends a message and activated all SIR units attack modes and they destroy all service droids.)

GIR: We were just kidding perhaps you’d like pie or perhaps see a film?

Service droid: Yes….

GIR (robotic): REQUEST DENIED!!!

(Without hesitation he blasts the snot out of the service robot.)


Alien: this is not bad once you get used to it.

Zim: well I’m sick and tired of it who’s with me!
Everyone (except Zim): I!!!!

(they all fight off the robot slave drivers and destroy everything. Zim then destroys Curd’s Henchmen with his Energy weapons.)

The Great Crud: I am from the Varax Nebula in the Mextophelix (Mex-to-felix) Galaxy.

(suddenly Zim and the SIR units show up.)

The Great Crud: This is getting too easy!

(A long fight occurs between everyone eventually Zim and GIR win the battle.)

The Great Crud: How…Can this be…..My units failing!

Zim: they’ve should have scraped you years ago!

(Zim does not hesitate to destroy him.)

Zim’s base

Zim: looks like another job well done!

GIR: I love TV!



. the Great Crud was inspired by this image

. the aliens Zim is working with are the same species from Hobo 13,
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Government Concil
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PostSubject: Re: Four to the Mongo    Four to the Mongo  Icon_minitimeFri Oct 08, 2010 1:50 pm

funny how Gir eats the Dog treats and relaxes at a S
Zim ends up at hard labor.

Funny Plus i like the extras on Crud he reminds me of Easter Island Statues set into the future
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