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Invader Zim
Invader Zim

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PostSubject: The Quantum Archangel   The Quantum Archangel Icon_minitimeSat Oct 02, 2010 7:43 am

The Quantum Archangel

Dead planet, the city at the Edge of forever, day

(We see Zim and GIR walk out of their ship. The planet is generally deserted, run down and very lifeless, the only things scene is ancient temples and statues of near-human creatures. )

Zim: well what do you think this place was one of the First Irken battle ground!

GIR: Cool! Wait what exactly happened here?

Zim: well a huge battle went on against a group of creatures who tormented us for an entire year. We destroyed all that is here, now it’s a planetary carcass.

GIR: Cool some rocks! MMMMMM…Taste good!

Zim: let’s get a move on, this place was once inhabited by a group of creatures made out of energy known as the Angolan.

(as Zim and GIR walk in the inner sanctum we a silhouette watching them. they walk towards a lever and push a button.)

Zim: weird this place is also called the city at the edge of forever.

GIR: Zim this place is weird!

Zim: well blame those Angolan who made this temple!

(suddenly after Zim clicks a button everything…STOPS.)

Zim’s Twisted Base, Night, Inside

(we see Zim suddenly appears in his base….And it’s not exactly right, it looks like something out of the film Coraline rather than a actual Base.)

Zim: GIR you better not have been playing with Quantum Physics!

GIR: Oh hi Zim I’m having fun time!

Zim: this could very well be a trap engineered by a higher power, try to look for something unusual other than all this.
GIR: Cool Moon….Wait it doesn’t look right.

(Zim looks out and the moon looks like…..A crescent moon flipped on its side.)

Zim: this is getting weird is this even suppose to happen.

(Suddenly a Near human alien comes out of the TV directly.)

The Nightmare Angol: before we end this I’d like t say that this is getting pointless plus the universe will be full of us again. I am the Nightmare Angol. I am not the last one.

Zim: Out of curiously, are you on the same medications as the director of Zardoz?

(The two combat one another for sometime eventually Zim wins and destroys his opponent.)

GIR: that was awesome! Do it again!

Zim: It’s impossible for that to happen again. Plus I noticed some lies in her voice.

(Suddenly everything happens again along with the Voot Runner teleported some where else.)

Zim’s base, day, inside

(Everything is teleported back in it’s proper place.)

GIR: want some Rocks?

Zim: I’ll be fine for now!



. the entire episode was inspired by this song

. the scene where the Angolan comes out of the TV is a reference to the horror film the ring

. In the dialogue between Zim and Angolan is a reference to the fact director of Zardoz was on medications heavy medications making the protagonist (men) wear Bikini bottoms

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Government Concil
Government Concil

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PostSubject: Re: The Quantum Archangel   The Quantum Archangel Icon_minitimeSat Oct 02, 2010 4:45 pm

i like the writting to set up the scenes cheers

grr was funn about eating the rocks. I think grr is great
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